As I prepare to wrap up and edit my New Adult novel this
year, I’d like to take an inconspicuous neon arrow and point it at something
that I find incredibly helpful when writing a novel. I like to call this little
something The Screenplay Method. Allow me to explain.
One of my favorite things to do (besides write novels) is
write movies. Writing a script/screenplay is pretty different than writing a
book. It’s usually no longer than 110 pages, it’s very concise, and it leaves
pretty much all of the emotions of the character to an actor. Your job is to put
down the story idea and let someone else fly with it. Dialogue and scenes are
meant to be as short as possible. Less is more. A screenplay is divided into
three acts, as well:
Act One: 25 pages
Act Two: 50 pages
Act Three: 25 pages
(roughly)
Each act basically introduces a new conflict, builds up to
the climax and ends in a satisfying resolution. Sound familiar? This is all the
same story stuff we do when we write a novel, or a short story – or anything.
Beginning, middle end. What is awesome about The Screenplay Method is you can use it to make sure your novel is
working well, and that tension and lulls are balanced out perfectly.
When I write a novel, I make a rough outline so I know where
my story is headed. After I know this, I take a blank piece of paper (or two),
and divide it into squares. In each square I write:
Conflict One
The conflict of my
choosing
Resolution:
How does this
conflict get resolved?
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A good novel will have anywhere from five to a hundred
conflicts. What I’m saying is, the longer the book, the more conflicts you’ll
end up having. Each one should have a plot within itself and, at the same time,
move the story forward. Let me give you an example:
Sally knows that
someone murdered her boyfriend. She wants revenge. She finds out who the
murderer is and sets off to kill him. What’s her primary goal? Find the murderer and take him down.
Before that primary goal can occur, though, there have to be other conflicts
for her to overcome; otherwise Sally would have a pretty darn boring story.
Each conflict must have a satisfying resolution. One of these resolutions might
be that Sally must face a thug on the streets who has information to the killer’s
whereabouts. This doesn’t resolve the story, but the immediate conflict is what? Stay alive. This keeps an adequate amount of tension in your story
while building up to the final showdown.
With each character in a screenplay, we do three things:
1.
Explore
their background, which will shape their character
2.
Identify
what their primary need is (In Sally’s case this is revenge)
3.
Identify
character flaws and make sure they have a transformation
These three things can be
transferred into novel writing, as well. What it makes us do is check our story
and build our characters into believable, relatable human beings (or aliens, faeries, vampires, or whatever). You do the same thing with your antagonists.
There are also 3 types of conflict
within each character:
Character vs. Another Character
An example of this is The Hunger Games. It’s one character
versus the other. Cato is trying to kill Katniss.
Character vs. Himself
A man or woman is warring with
themselves over their own shortcomings or irrational feelings. Examples of this
could be a man who finds out his wife is cheating on him and becomes
emotionally spent, believing it’s his fault. Maybe he overcomes his flaw of not
being involved enough in his marriage by the end of the story.
Character vs. the Unfeeling Force
This is when your protagonist
comes up against an enemy greater than a single person. In Star Wars, the
unfeeling forces are the Empire and Stormtroopers. There are a lot of them and
they’re coming from everywhere. The personification of the unfeeling force,
however, is seen in Darth Vader, right?
Using these few things when writing a novel will keep your
story strong, your characters volatile and humanized, and your make your novel a piece of
art. I’m not kidding. Writing a book using some of the tips from screenwriters
is novel-writing gold. Why? Because it takes the idea of a story, simplifies
it, identifies its primary goals, and as a result, you get a chance to pen the best book you’ve ever written.
Happy Halloween! Don't let the ghouls get to you!



Thank you for mentioning the "vs the Unfeeling Force" conflict. People often seem to forget about that conflict, even though it often proves to be the least resolvable of all potential conflicts.
ReplyDeleteYes, I agree. It seems to be the most difficult to solve because it can be hard to personify or give specific character or motive to an "unfeeling force." Which is why people give those forces personal characters to represent the evil, I guess, like Darth Vader or Saromon from Lord of the Rings.
DeleteGreat post, Summer! :D
ReplyDeleteThanks! :)
DeleteGreat post :) I'll be putting some of these tips to use on my WIP for sure!
ReplyDeleteThanks! Glad you found them useful! :)
DeleteAh, yes. Plotting 'Save The Cat' style -- the plotting method that totally *clicked* with me.
ReplyDeleteGreat post! :D
Yes, 'Save The Cat,' indeed!
DeleteAwesome, awesome post Summer! In the book I use they call this the three-act structure and it's very effective! Makes the story very interesting :D
ReplyDeleteI think it's the best way to outline a story, just because it makes it simpler. And I'm all about simple, lol
DeleteExcellent post. As a writer with a film degree, I use this method for every project. It works superbly well. It keeps my stories tight and well-paced (in my humble opinion).
ReplyDeleteWow, a film degree!! That's really awesome!!! :D
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